Oh Richard did you get stabbed or left to rot in a Castle?
You did last 22 years as King:
From 1377-1399
Until someone plotted your undoing.
You did last 22 years as a King
But heavy lay the crown upon your head
From 1377-1399
Then later you were stabbed, or left for dead.
Heavy lay the crown upon your head
Your kinsmen made a plot to end your life
In 1400 you were stabbed, or left for dead
And later buried beside Anne, your wife.
Your kinsmen made a plot to end your life
though you did last 22 years as King
you were buried beside Anne, your wife
After someone plotted your undoing.
I am reading ‘Richard II’ by William Shakespeare in my English lessons. I like the story it is very exciting. But I haven’t finished reading yet so I don’t know all the details.
I am entering this poem in the EIF Poetry Challenge. Also linking to dVerse Open Link Night Live!
Beautiful write dear boy! 👏👏
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Well done, Benji! You mastered the Pantoum poetry form! 😃
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I know
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😉
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great job!
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I know😎
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well done Benji ! A thoughtful perceptive poem. You have used this medium to capture the pain of history. Good luck in the competition !
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Thanks Grandad
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Congratulations, Benji! https://experimentsinfiction.com/2020/11/25/eif-poetry-challenge-10-the-results/ ❤️
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Bravo, Benji!
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Thanks
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I know!
(A pleasure! You’re a good writer. Please let me know how ‘Richard 2’ ends) 🙂
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Impressive, Benji! Good luck in the competition! 🙂
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Congratulations on your win! 😀
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But I didn’t win
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🥉 Third place means you won over those who didn’t place at all, right? And you’re competing against folks many times your age! Wonderful.
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Well I at least I got infront of my grandad
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And I bet he’s not too unhappy about that! 😊
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Well I don’t know
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A clever idea to take the history of Richard II and write a pantoum, Benji. It was great to hear your read this today.
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Bravo Benji
Much💜love
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Pantoumilicious, Benji. Thanks for sharing. Salute!
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Wonderful! Not an easy form for me.
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I enjoy this form and enjoyed your poem……
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A most gorgeously worded Pantoum, Benji. Bravo!! 💝💝
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You did a wonderful job on this one. The form is spot on and perfectly written.
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Well done for reading this so well with your brother tickling your feet 🙂
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Great job with this form Benji! And pretty good job of reading aloud when your brother was tickling you! 🙂
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This is a wonderful pantoum, Benji.
I’m sorry I missed your reading on Thursday.
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Oh wow! I read Richard II in high school and you brought back memories. Wonderful pantoum.
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Love what you did here… a pantoun is a great way to remember a story.
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